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03-05-2007, 07:42 AM	#1
Offbeat smells like content Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: jmu Posts: 1,122	WarioWear?! In Computer Graphics we were given the assignment to design a T-Shirt, and the top 5 in the class will actually be produced and displayed at the school. Since im artisticly untalented and devoid of good ideas, I decided to make a shirt I would actually wear and make it myself. Amongst my cohorts, whenever something isnt going down the popular fallback is to crack open the N64 and play the classic Mario Parties. From that, this monstrosity came to fruition: Front: Back: I think it looks pretty classy, despite the fact wearing it will make me look like a supreme douchebag. However maybe thats part of its appeal... What do you guys think? [EDIT] Fixed bad image links __________________ Last edited by Offbeat : 03-05-2007 at 07:50 AM.

03-05-2007, 08:34 AM	#2
~~GuNn3rs14~~ Banned Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Montreal,Canada Posts: 286	its too empty, especially the back, ad some more stuff but its pretty cool i would wear it too

03-05-2007, 08:40 AM	#3
hacker_renegade 4406-8376-8516-1626 Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: Miami Posts: 1,956	i agree too empty

03-05-2007, 09:07 AM	#4
Deacon anti-social commentary Join Date: Jul 2002 Posts: 27,461	only the back is too empty but really it should just say wario ware and cut the image on the back altogether

03-05-2007, 09:13 AM	#5
Spawn Lurking around... Join Date: Mar 2002 Location: The Netherlands Posts: 4,212	Agrees with Deacon. the image on the front is very good. Keep it. But the image on the back... meh... lose it, or draw something in the same style as the front.

03-05-2007, 02:50 PM	#6
kinopio Operation Kino Join Date: Nov 2002 Posts: 14,628	I'd wear something more subtle, like just the nose and staches on a tshirt. Who am I kidding of course I wouldn't. __________________ Now playing Silent Hill: Shattered Memories Resident Evil: The Darkside Chronicles Torchlight

03-05-2007, 03:22 PM	#7
MisterHero-DX Lakitu Join Date: Sep 2004 Posts: 979	I think the design needs to be re-started around a Yellow shirt rather than white, if you have the option. Other suggestable colors: Magenta, Blue, Pink It could use thicker lines, imo. It better reflects on the game's art direction as well as boldens the overall appearance of the design. What would be cool is it had 'Team member' or 'developer' or 'staff' on some part of the shirt. Anyway my thoughts. Good luck on the final version. __________________ OMG POKEMANZ

03-05-2007, 03:52 PM	#8
CJ Thunder Free Government Money! Join Date: Dec 2001 Location: SoCal Posts: 9,946	Too empty? Are 95 percent of your people's bodies covered with tats? I think its very good, but NOT on a white shirt, I just don't like white that much. Last edited by CJ Thunder : 03-06-2007 at 02:07 PM.

03-05-2007, 03:56 PM	#9
danytoca sun Join Date: Oct 2002 Posts: 4,792	I don't think its too empty, IMO its good as it is. __________________ dani tuga?

03-05-2007, 04:04 PM	#10
FAT2001 Lakitu Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: 8===========> Posts: 2,165	spooges __________________

03-05-2007, 06:30 PM	#11
Souzetsu Ready to Fly Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: California Posts: 7,280	I like it.

03-05-2007, 07:00 PM	#12
sonicblue Thundercougarfalconbird Join Date: May 2002 Location: South Florida Posts: 20,156	Very cool, justs drop the image on the back. __________________

03-05-2007, 07:06 PM

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I'd lose the back image and all the text. So essentially it would just be Wario's mug.

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03-05-2007, 07:08 PM

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Originally Posted by sonicblue

Very cool, justs drop the image on the back.

I agree. And maybe not so much squigglies off the moustache.

03-06-2007, 06:33 AM	#15
Offbeat smells like content Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: jmu Posts: 1,122	The assignment is to fill the shirt up with as much as possible, so I was going to try to fill up space by continuing the squiggle onto the other side of the shirt. I agree that it looks kind out of place so I might just drop it and let my grade take a hit. Yeah, and I also think I'm going to use the sketch effect on the back too. The back image is really supposed to be small and unnoticable, just kind of on the top of the middle of the back. I this WarioWear is too clever to drop, so I might cling to it like a falling star. Bene Gratias for all the feedback though! __________________

03-06-2007, 02:07 PM

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CJ Thunder

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Originally Posted by Offbeat

The assignment is to fill the shirt up with as much as possible, so I was going to try to fill up space by continuing the squiggle onto the other side of the shirt. I agree that it looks kind out of place so I might just drop it and let my grade take a hit.

Yeah, and I also think I'm going to use the sketch effect on the back too. The back image is really supposed to be small and unnoticable, just kind of on the top of the middle of the back. I this WarioWear is too clever to drop, so I might cling to it like a falling star.

Bene Gratias for all the feedback though!

Wait, are you saying the assignment is to make something busy? What class was this for again?

03-06-2007, 03:13 PM	#17
Offbeat smells like content Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: jmu Posts: 1,122	The assignment was to make a T-Shirt, and by the sounds of it, she wanted it to be VERY busy. Like, designs going down the sleeve and everything. It sounds to me shes more interested in making us work then us actually making a decent looking T-Shirt, so, Im just going to turn in whatever I want. __________________

03-06-2007, 03:22 PM	#18
CJ Thunder Free Government Money! Join Date: Dec 2001 Location: SoCal Posts: 9,946	Seriously, you should be learning art, form, color & balance among other things. Busy works sometimes but I don't think on a shirt.